Some research research into similar textsis included and is reasonably thorough. Some research into audience has been done. Some good drafting has been included. The web pages feature some very good elements, but too much is irrelevant. It is also a shame that certain parts are not accurate. The evaluation is a little too basic and needs to contain more analysis and detail.

Planning 14 / 20 Production 43 / 60 Evaluation 13 / 20 Total 70 / 100 Grade B